I made my own build, need help:D

Hey, i made my own build on it works pretty well(i have low hp and im working on it) can someone please take a look at my build and tell me if i do something wrong or i could do something better)
thouse are the items im using atm, im cyclone kinda elemental crit, totaly first build i have made and that works xD with pots and buffs i get like 300k tooltip dps, just wanted to know if i'm doing something wrong or i could change something. Skill tree

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https://www.pathofexile.com/fullscreen-passive-skill-tree/3.1.1/AAAABAQBAQHcBS0GIAaiDHAOPBDwFE0UcRUgFewX3BiRGbQaVRuqIWAj9iSdJP0ppS2DMHwxsDboOlI7tkCgRJ5GaUd-TZJRR1O7XhNhIWFSYlpjF2SjZU1yqXSgdO108Xaseu-BOoIHhNmGYIa0iO2K8I19kn2Yb5kro4qlNan6rY2ygLkdvJ-9Nr2BvqfBB8FJxILE9sjcypDL9c9-037UUtd-2XzcI9y94e_lz-cP51TpRuoY7g7vTu968kHyWvVh9qP3Mvjr_Ev-Hf_e?accountName=m2tuu&characterName=IchiefUwar

Anyone? xD

Ummm... i don't want to be rude... But
Your tree is awful for real man... Checked your PoB, there's actually nothing
109% inc HP... that's low, you should consider to rebuild whole tree, at this point it has no use
No jewels there... That's rly bad, crit builds are based on jewels (crit multi, hp, attack speed)
You should aim for over 90% hit chance

well im just lvl 73 so i have room for more health and jewels
and this is my first time ever making one so, you are not rude thats what i asked. thx

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Weturon a écrit :

Ummm... i don't want to be rude... But
Your tree is awful for real man... Checked your PoB, there's actually nothing
109% inc HP... that's low, you should consider to rebuild whole tree, at this point it has no use
No jewels there... That's rly bad, crit builds are based on jewels (crit multi, hp, attack speed)
You should aim for over 90% hit chance

also it doesnt help much if i dont have a clue how to make tree right:D

would this tree be better? did it with path of building http://poeurl.com/bH5k