Art Feedback

The scene where the protagonist jumps off the city wall after selecting a class has issues—the wall appears too short, and the lack of significant height between the jump point and the landing spot diminishes the sense of distance and urgency in this escape sequence (despite the background music clearly aiming to evoke exactly that feeling!). The camera's focal length might also contribute to this perception. Perhaps you could experiment with a Hitchcock zoom—it might look really cool.