100% Crit - Ice trap trickster - Looking for sparring

Hey guys!

Ive been tinkering with an icetrap build for 3.24 that can do ubers, and also do a decent job mapping without dying all the time.

I looked into occultist, but i dont like starting in that side of the tree, and then i looked into saboteur, but i feel like trickster is more my style with high suppress, polymath, extra frenzies and some more ES for ghostshroud to play with.

I did some playtesting in affliction without using the charms or ascendancies.

This is the POB ive been tinkering together, but i would love to hear some feedback from the community.

https://pobb.in/hksqkA5Qw63_

Thanks for your participation