Redesigned Sunder Champion Aluna Inspired

hey guys so i redesigned my previous god of war sunder build with a particular streamer by the name of alunanaughty in mind after watching her play i decided to output what i feel is a strong viable 3.0 sunder build for champion class i would love if you guys could check out the video and leave any thoughts or comments on it as well as check out her stream she is still pretty new to the game as am i and we would both love to hear all of your thoughts and opinions on how we can improve as players.

Aluna's Stream: https://www.twitch.tv/alunanaughty/videos/all

Sunder Build: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vr8FYkLeBkE